Samples

Sample Scoring Guides (Rubrics) and Reportsminireports

Our Beginner’s Scoring Guide K-2 and Scoring Guide 3-12 are available in our Scoring Guides and Prompt Listings document.

Click to download a copy of our sample reports. Included in our sample reports is a selection from our “Rater Notes” report.

Sample Scored Papers

The following papers, scores and comments range from kindergarten to high school. Two sets of scores by two independent raters are shown for the analytical, six trait scoring. The comments are detailed in the effort to illustrate the issues raters typically discuss during a calibration. Our usual comments are not so lengthy and involved.

The Common Core proficiency check is a separate evaluation based on the Common Core writing standards and applicable language standards for the grade level. Please note: Only those standards that are demonstrated in the paper we receive can be evaluated. If the piece does not include evidence of a given standard—for instance, L.5.2a (commas in a series), it is labeled as “not evident in this writing.” A standard marked as “needs work” means that either the standard was visibly demonstrated to be in error, or that the standard was omitted when called for.
 

Family Tree Wake Up Farm
Kindergarten – Expository First Grade – Expository
Six Trait Scores
Common Core Proficiency Check
Student Comments (Printable)
Six Trait Scores
Common Core Proficiency Check
Student Comments (Printable)
 
 
I Got a Kite Water Land
First Grade – Expository Third Grade – Narrative
Six Trait Scores
Common Core Proficiency Check
Student Comments (Printable)
Six Trait Scores
Common Core Proficiency Check
Student Comments (Printable)
 
 
That Noise Cell Phone
Eighth Grade – Narrative Eighth Grade – Expository
Six Trait Scores
Common Core Proficiency Check
Student Comments (Printable)
Six Trait Scores
Common Core Proficiency Check
Student Comments (Printable)
 
 
Drivers License “My First Sanddoller”
Ninth Grade – Expository Ninth Grade – Narrative
Six Trait Scores
Common Core Proficiency Check
Student Comments (Printable)
Six Trait Scores
Common Core Proficiency Check
Student Comments (Printable)